tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-825523244780267624.post5643369781373213565..comments2023-08-07T07:01:07.878-07:00Comments on Travistalks: Joe Benson: The Twins enigmaTravis Aunehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03384257585939896204noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-825523244780267624.post-48013271085333482712011-08-01T16:33:31.575-07:002011-08-01T16:33:31.575-07:00Benson's numbers have been really good since y...Benson's numbers have been really good since you wrote this article.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-825523244780267624.post-33524035509683861192011-07-20T07:35:42.192-07:002011-07-20T07:35:42.192-07:00i do the best i can. I don't consider myself ...i do the best i can. I don't consider myself the journalist. But i appreciate the advice and will try to improve, but like i said this is just a hobby and am doing the best i can. Thanks for stopping and reading.Travis Aunehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03384257585939896204noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-825523244780267624.post-597696632628232782011-07-20T07:05:26.565-07:002011-07-20T07:05:26.565-07:00If you want to join Joe Benson in the bigs, concen...If you want to join Joe Benson in the bigs, concentrate on tightening up your copy. Think of repetition and run-on sentences as strikeouts. Read good writers closely, taking time to notice how they don't (usually) waste the reader's time with sloppy structure. <br /><br />I do appreciate the post -- I know more about Benson than I did before.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com